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The Other Day I loved You
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The Other Day I loved You |
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tatalinia Member
since 2005-12-17
Posts 137CA, US 
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My heart still holds onto the last day you kissed me Held me gently in your arms , caressing me Engulfing me in your strong hold I breathed in your breaths, your soul became one with mine I loved you so much what has become of us The taste of your skin still lingering on my lips The tickle of your hair brushing across my nose The silent pause of nothing but our love Our legs an feet tied in knots, our fingers locked in another Staring into your eyes as you stare into mine My heart turns now at just these thoughts But out of no where they were taken away What we shared just the other day If I could change anything it would be the silence we carry now And the look on your face when you see my frowns But for now I watch in silence as our relationship drowns I have given up , there is no hope for us now I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health |
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Philmont Member
since 2004-01-10
Posts 61 |
Emotional and heartfelt. I hope you get over it. |
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Bobomo Junior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 35 |
Very open, very free. A very good portrayal of the slow crumbling of a relationship. |
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