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Alone in the dark
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since 2006-02-10
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On the edge of an abyss

0 posted 2006-07-16 06:09 AM


Has anybody ever listened,
heard the tears that i've cried?
Has anybody felt the pain
that tears me up inside?

Has anybody heard the screams
that echo through my head?
Has anybody seen the dreams
that fill my mind with dread?

Has anybody known the fear
and horror that I've known?
Does anybody know if God exists
or am I all alone?



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1 posted 2006-07-16 11:24 AM


Angel~
The halls of blue welcome these wonderful thoughts~

*Huglets*

~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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stargal
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since 2006-03-06
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2 posted 2006-07-17 01:46 PM


"Has anybody known the fear
and horror that I've known?
Does anybody know if God exists
or am I all alone?"


If only I knew the answer to such questions! I wish I did... This poem makes me sad, yet, it also makes me think. I loved the questions you asked in this, each one of them different, yet, the same.

Thanks for sharing, this has given me much to think about

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Alone in the dark
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On the edge of an abyss
3 posted 2006-07-18 02:54 AM


Thank you. You both always have such nice things to say. I appreciate it more than you know.
      

   ^*^Angel^*^

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