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Dark Poetry #4

Evenings Very Alocated

zigwield
Member

since 2006-06-25

Posts 61

0 posted 2006-07-08 05:25 AM

i love the ways you speak
i fear for your denial
i want to meet you

just send me a way
send me a demon who speaks
the words i understand

my dreamings are for me
to be free
in your own fantasies
not in mine

my wishful miracle
is to finally see you
meet you
face this cursed reality of mine

be part of your task
i want to be yours
i will kneel
i will begg
just i want to be aware
that you will be real

i will knock your door
but i fear your denial
i wish and pray for your mercy
i love you
my dreams is your reality

speak to me please
in the words of fools
that i can once understand
cause i know no other words
cause i am a fool

you make me so nice
you give me safety
you can only give me freedom
to you i can only speak
to you i only want to be with

and i thank you
for the time you invest
just for me
i appreciate this a lot

i know very few things
i may not be real all the times
but i am very truth
and i mean it really real
when i need to say
i love you!

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

1 posted 2006-07-10 02:31 PM

"speak to me please
in the words of fools
that i can once understand
cause i know no other words
cause i am a fool""

Very nice stanza^^, I like the "fools" part of it a lot.

I'm not sure I understand the whole poem, but parts of it I can relate to so I like it. It's a little different, not like most things I have seen. A little hard for me to understand, but I'm dense so that could be part of it.

All in all though I found it to be an enjoyable read. Not one I can relate, relate a lot too, but some...

Thanks for sharing

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