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zigwield
Member

since 2006-06-25

Posts 61

0 posted 2006-06-27 11:59 AM

One night together
for all the lonely nights

once again You and i
we can rock in the sky

dark illusions of a past
the future can now become so fast

just like a book
i ain't that fool

i like to speak for glory
as i for terror sometimes enjoy

and to go deeper to the vault
it is a choise of me and there is no stop

we can rest sometimes though
just as You remind me "it is again time to go"

i don't feel less mortal
for yet a humiliation that will be total

but all i can surely say without doubt
is that You and only You seperated me from the crowd

first time has that for me been
something that again i need to feel

once again You and i
we can rock in the sky

once again You will sing
and i will be at your side

dark friend of night
strange lover of the sky

you awoke me from the dead
gave me a life that You more respect

Digital_Hell
Member

since 2006-06-05

Posts 202
Amidst black roses

1 posted 2006-06-27 12:26 PM

nice write although a bit short. but we all have some things in the past that are best left forgotten... Keep it up

hells gate reads Abandon hope all ye that enter here
shall we go?
the road to hell is paved with good intentions.
Will you walk with me?

zigwield
Member

since 2006-06-25

Posts 61

2 posted 2006-06-27 12:37 PM

past should not be forgoten because in this case we may do the same errors.
Unhappy past should be some kind of a way to be directed to the better future

hmm?

Digital_Hell
Member

since 2006-06-05

Posts 202
Amidst black roses

3 posted 2006-06-27 02:01 PM

Perhaps but there are things that happen tjhat are best left forgotten. Things so terrible they are impossible to ever fully deal with. They are best left locked away in your mind

hells gate reads Abandon hope all ye that enter here
shall we go?
the road to hell is paved with good intentions.
Will you walk with me?

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

4 posted 2006-06-29 01:24 AM

I liked this, but I'm not sure that I think it is short? I think it's just perfect for what it is and the way you worded this poem was amazing! I loved it...

As for somethings being best forgotten it's true but I also think it's true we should learn from our mistakes... So, i'd have to agree with both sides of this disscusion?

Great job on this poem zigwield, i'd love to see more by you in the near future

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