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Dark Poetry #4

Untitled - On Anxiety

zt88
Junior Member

since 2006-04-29

Posts 11

0 posted 2006-04-29 01:06 AM

Cry for revolution, and I will join you
Not for the political, nor the world
But for my knots inside

Give to me your kind words and shoulder,
And tell me you were the same...
That you were uneasy, guilty and no stranger to shame

That your flame was bright but shaded by anxiety
That you had a message like the one locked inside of me

You saw the truth but you just couldn’t believe,
Because the truth itself was the hardest to conceive...

Please tell me you triumphed over all your apprehension
That you are no more a slave to all the pain and tension
That you can honestly say you believe in yourself…

- ZT.

niere
Member

since 2006-04-23

Posts 77

1 posted 2006-04-30 10:45 AM

i really liked this - the whole notion of a self-revolution... it's really cool.

it's a pity when some one really great can't see themselves how great they are....

a really good piece.

zt88
Junior Member

since 2006-04-29

Posts 11

2 posted 2006-04-30 01:06 PM

Thank you...ZT.

Alone in the dark
Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 105
On the edge of an abyss

3 posted 2006-05-13 07:46 AM

I can relate to the pain you express, because it mirrors my own. I hope someday you will be able to believe in youself. I hope we all can.

pullingxthextrigger
Member

since 2006-05-01

Posts 133
MA,..USA llx

4 posted 2006-05-13 04:57 PM

very very nice. keep it up

~nora<3

your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong llx - P!ATD!

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