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desert-spike
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0 posted 2006-02-17 04:16 PM


Of Heat and Serenity

I welcome the hooks
of her warm embrace
the taste of her kiss
the look on her face
as I lie there
in the soft felt glade
in the garden
of her soul blades
just a pin prick
of her love
blood trickles down
across and from above
from those spikes in her mouth
a touch, a thing
I cannot live without

A shiver of heat
of pain
of bliss
traces my skin
the echo of that first kiss
such love
such heartache
I've so longed for this thing
bourn what I can take
and she is there
to take the rest
inside that stare
that I love the best
inside the shadows
of that gaze
there is no word
no feeling
no phrase
to express this thing
this love
it blows like the wind
up off the sea
from this awating soul
to her eternity

so take me
break me
grind me down
I don't care
I'm reborn is this
thing we have found
with you I am free
in my heart
in my soul
consume my all
for you I am whole

[This message has been edited by desert-spike (02-18-2006 05:18 PM).]

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2006-02-17 04:24 PM


well now...

seems you found some inspiration!

Got my attention, y'did!

Much enjoyed, but I have to wonder if you didn't enjoy it more!

green_itchy_stuff
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2 posted 2006-02-18 01:42 PM


I noticed a few spelling errors, but yeah... Dark.

God bless,
In Christ,
-GIS

So what if my wings are too scratched, cut, and beat up to fly... I'll walk.

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3 posted 2006-02-18 01:48 PM


wow deep
desert-spike
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4 posted 2006-02-18 05:15 PM


oops...I'll go spell check my work now then. better late than never hey?
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