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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2006-01-16 04:37 AM



In Seattle I let the bats fly
Darkness settled around
And I got confused
Peak, tear, and morning
Money and power corruption abused
Incense multiply me
Jesus breath be used

So what if my wings are too scratched, cut, and beat up to fly... I'll walk.

© Copyright 2006 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2006-01-16 11:05 PM


This is lovely Craig.

I adore your sig there too.

Don't be so tough on yourself.


Kaos
Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317
between space and time
2 posted 2006-01-17 11:07 AM


i always enjoy reading your pieces... you're a one of a kind artist. Thanks for sharing


Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-i wrote it somewhere in time

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
3 posted 2006-01-17 10:44 PM


Thank you littlewing...  ... you... ROCK...!  Its been a while, where you been?  Yeah, I think if I just readjust a few things it would probably go a LOT smoother.  But its nice to hear from you.

Kaos, well I appreciate the compliment.  That rocks.

God bless,
-GIS

So what if my wings are too scratched, cut, and beat up to fly... I'll walk.

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