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Blossoming Eternity |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time 
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The leaves have turned from bland leaving a spectacle not to be overlooked beneath the scattered sounds of scurrying around over the gentle murmur of nearby life slowly trickling to a bigger picture of freedom Carrying the last flower the last breath of life along with the troubles of it's indigenous lifeforms And so fast the world now blanketed by a new face As the old rests peaceful hoping to breath anew with a chance to regroup under this white face of brilliance Letting it slowly melt away bringing ice cold life into a world that had been deprived of color life and purpose Now blossoming once again Filling with life in the blossoms tail as it reaches the conclusion of purpose they both flow into the vast of freedom to share eternity together 12-23-05 "i said 'How bout a revelution' and he said 'Right' i said oh, you say ah, i say revelution and you say ja,That was the craziest game of poker" |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Michael~ 'under this white face of brilliance' What a lovely thought for a snow blanket~ :bumping: for a go-round~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
Thank you so much for the wonderful comments, i appreciate it much :-) Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free |
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SATURN Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 78ok,us |
There isnt much to say except that I LOVE this!!!! Hali |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Yeah, that was cool. Hey God bless. -GIS So what if my wings are too scratched, cut, and beat up to fly... I'll walk. |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
thank you for the comments Saturn- i haven't read too much of your stuff but i've been making it a goal to get around to reading more work in the forums, so i won't forget to check you out GIS- thanks again for takin the time to stop in Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free |
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sanozatsho Junior Member
since 2006-01-26
Posts 14 |
indeed, nature is a very beautiful thing. how it works, looks, smell(well some times....) the best example of nature i have is when i was in colorado for spring break. we were skiing and i was riding the lift up and there was this other woman with me that kind of spoiled it. but, after a certain way up, it was silent, a silence i had never heard before and have yet to hear again. i wanted to jump off and explore this silence. but, a 20-30 foot drop is not good on the human body. so i had to leave it behind. but that silence, just echoed in my mind, my ears. an absolute, i so wish to hear it again. and i kind of a feeling in that ball park with your poem, least i should say we like nature. |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
colorado is beautiful, especially from a lift with a board strapped on :-) i understand the silence you speak of... thank you again for replying, i always appreciate kind words and most importantly i love sharing pieces that others enjoy as much as i do. Thanks -mike |
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