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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2005-12-19 11:01 PM




handcuffs and pillows

guilt surrenders to relief

childlike shame constrained

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2005-12-20 12:29 PM


oh, so very very
dark
made me shiver with this
icebox

Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 2005-12-20 11:32 AM


Chilling!

  

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Dadtoudi
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3 posted 2005-12-20 05:24 PM


hmm very good makes you think that one,
littlewing
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4 posted 2005-12-20 06:01 PM


this is an amazing write and moreso reminds me of this tune by Pearl Jam, "Don't Call Me Daughter"  . . . do you know this?

Thank you for this, icey.

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