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He Is Gone (senyru challenge)
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He Is Gone (senyru challenge) |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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in the dreaming years below the City’s surface no taste of sunlight we chased the Dragon babies in awareness’ night death came home to rest ideas in ashes your body freely scattered all your dreams released ©2005 by icebox |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
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Brian James Member
since 2005-06-26
Posts 147Winnipeg |
I like the opening, the closing, the whole durned thing. It seems difficult to create atmosphere in so few lines. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sometimes I curse this medium, even knowing that it blessed me as it allowed me to "meet" so many beautiful souls such as yourself, and yet there is still the undeniable curse that I cannot hold your hand or give you hugs, to offer solace when my words fail me. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Gosh, this brought me many smiles to see this challenge brought back up, although I don't moderate anymore, still makes me smile, even moreso. Thanks icey. And this? Well, you won! *laughing* This form is something that slips through my fingers . . . I have to really WORK on writing these . . . and yours is amazing - all of them. I bow to you, sir. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
excellent! you have the challenge down pat...well done! ~hugs~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Purple Poet On Wheels Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 145Pittsburgh/Edinboro, PA |
Interesting wordplay Mr. Icebox |
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