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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2005-11-29 01:46 AM



When you live a little different and people call you strange
You have a life of meaning and purpose and somewhere out of range
Separate the fool bring full circle rule
Set the stakes high risk your life and death
Live a life of Jesus, but don't wash away

Here I stand amazed by the Mellenia Man and I write this poetry
Need to hit the bottom and the ground to realize whats inside me
Here I stand amazed and blind in a trillion ways
Does not having a home make me less of a man?
My life, I stumble, I freely give for you "JESUS LOVES YOU!!!"
...just thought I would remind you

At this point I come face to face with my creator
I've been forgiven for the mistakes I've made
A thin life of Hell?  I only wish it would have been worse
But I'm still breathing and my foot is all thats hurting
I'm here to tell you about Jesus, and His heart is still beatting
I want to be closer to you God

When you live a little different and people call you strange
You have a life of meaning and purpose somewhere out of range
Separate the fool bring the full circle rule
Set the stakes high risk your life and death
Live a life of Jesus, but don't wash away


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I'm not actually homeless yet.  Its awesome though.  I've seen so many things that are crazy, but I'm no where near perfect and God can be witness to my mistakes.  God bless.

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

© Copyright 2005 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
HAZMATTO
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since 2005-11-24
Posts 14

1 posted 2005-12-08 10:31 PM


We all live different lives and people are always calling me strange. I consider it a compliment. I hope that you never become homeless. I've been there and it's no fun.


green_itchy_stuff
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2 posted 2005-12-09 06:40 PM


Actually I'm not sure what I'm doing.  Last night I slept at a guys house that I've never met before, again...  I played some songs for him though...  I even prayed for him.  His name is Benjamin and hes a Mexican from Mexico.  Seattle gets cold at night when you don't listen to others and go out in the streets playing music.  If you would like to understand what I'm talking about go to this thing /pip/Forum84/HTML/001117.html  And read the letters in order down the page.  That should explain it.

-GIS

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

Annie78
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here then there then back here
3 posted 2005-12-13 11:21 AM


i can't tell you why this touched me so, because i don't know why, but your faith in our Lord touches me and I liked how you put this.
Annie

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

green_itchy_stuff
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4 posted 2005-12-16 06:52 PM


Thank you.  Actually faith isn't always easy.  Sometimes its somewhat irritating, but God rocks.  God bless.

-GIS

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

Edward Grim
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since 2005-12-18
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Greenville, South Carolina
5 posted 2005-12-18 02:54 PM


Your poem unearths emotions that I thought I forgot how to feel. You have a deep understanding of faith. God bless and be with you my friend.    - Ed Grim
Annie78
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6 posted 2005-12-18 04:45 PM


how true it is about faith being rather irritating sometimes....He says He will never give us more than we can handle. I just wish He didn't have so much confidence in what it is He thinks I can handle.
God be with you during this holiday season
Annie

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

green_itchy_stuff
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7 posted 2005-12-19 05:13 AM


Ed- God does that.  Its amazing the things he will show you and throw you off guard.

Annie- Its because he knows you can even if you think you can't.  Basically when it gets thick, its a complement from God telling you you're tougher than you think you are.

God bless
-GIS

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

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