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Dark Poetry #4

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Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2005-11-07 02:31 AM

Water sits on the chateau
Where raisin fields gather.
Skies move wide,
Suns ray total the town’s eye.
Crops breath, then grow,
Liven to farmer’s hands of steel.
Autumn falls on each leaf’s face,
As moon sits waiting on Sautrday.
Coffee and roosters begin life’s breakfast,
as the town's season has yet to feel autumn.

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

1 posted 2005-11-11 12:29 PM

this is a kind of abstract look at a single moment in life and what all the things around it are doing. great job on capturing the moment right before autumn.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

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