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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2005-11-02 11:51 PM



Jesus, do you see what's going on?
Omnipotent eyes, your omnicries
Watch them mock you savior
Its foolishness with the anti-signs

I wanna be with your love for me
Set us free,... the stupid sheep
I wanna be, away with me
Hate is stupid; the stupid sheep
Jesus is freedom for the sheep
Hate is stupid; the stupid sheep

Tell me a secret that I don't know
The secret is old because God knows
You found a liar leader and you followed him
All the way to his death
Here's the truthful light you seek
Jesus loves you so get on your feet
Take your diaper off!!

Certain eyes ascertain me, entertain me
Pretty plastic pink display
Hunility, I love it
Its inside me to tell you, push
Don't be stupid
Satan's whores and worms on a hook
Just Jesus love come take a look

I want God's love for me and you
Set us free, the stupid sheep
I die everyday, every second and live for life
Hate is stupid, you stupid sheep
Freedom, Jesus is our shepherd
And hate is a by-product of stupid sheep

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

© Copyright 2005 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
gelato
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since 2005-10-27
Posts 63
TN,USA
1 posted 2005-11-07 03:48 PM


I liked it and the sentiment behind it.

I had one problem with a repetative line:

"Hate is stupid, you stupid sheep"

Is there another way of saying this, still keeping in the "stupid sheep" of course.

Clown
New Member
since 2005-11-10
Posts 4
the twisted circus of my mind
2 posted 2005-11-10 02:16 AM


cool
Kaos
Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317
between space and time
3 posted 2005-11-11 02:43 PM


i enjoyed this alot, very refreshing to the stuff i've been reading. thanks for sharing

"Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light"
-Dylan Thomas

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
4 posted 2005-12-20 01:47 AM


Hey, thanks.  I appreciate it.  Yeah, maybe some of the lyrics or poetry could be better or have a better flow.  God bless.

-GIS

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

sanozatsho
Junior Member
since 2006-01-26
Posts 14

5 posted 2006-01-30 11:55 PM


i see you really want to be an uber munich.
is this a rant or a belif if i may inquire?

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
6 posted 2006-02-02 06:33 PM


That is why I believe God will make this a successful song.  I have't finished it yet, but I played a show the other day at a coffee shop and a lady in the audience got up and left right as my first lyrics were coming in.  That is awesome.  Whether you criticize it. like it, have advice for it, or want me to shut up you're still paying attention.  Pay attention to this too.  God bless.  Jesus loves you inspite of yourself.

-GIS

So what if my wings are too scratched, cut, and beat up to fly... I'll walk.

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