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SharaRose
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0 posted 2003-09-22 11:26 AM





It would all be different,
if you didn't threaten me.
It would all be different,
if you'd ever opened your eyes to see.
It would all be different,
If you hadn't closed your mind.
It would all be different,
If you weren't so blind.
It would all be different,
If I were in this alone.
It would all be different,
If you would stop your moan,and groan.
It would all be different,
If you didnt think yourself so stealth
Flying below radar.
It would all be different
If you hadn't left this deep scar.

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

© Copyright 2003 Shara - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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1 posted 2003-09-22 02:52 PM


Beautiful writing Shara
and yes it would all be different,
yet without our scars we lie stagnant
Painful as they may be,
they are our only education in this mess
of life . . .
xxoo  

SharaRose
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2 posted 2003-09-22 03:39 PM


and thank you littlewings much appreciated you are.

Lexy
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3 posted 2003-09-22 09:06 PM


The question go around,
and they never stop spinning you.
And we all puke, and start again.
Sometimes you have to put yourself in the other persons shoes, and know that its just as hard for them.
Nice.
~Lex

SharaRose
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4 posted 2003-09-22 10:42 PM


This is *DARK* poetry section. There are over 3000 posts here in DARK poetry, and I don't think I'm the only person that posts poems about hurt, and pain from a past exp. I see it all the time here on this site, and other sites, too. Makes me wonder why mine are singled-out, and made statements like this about them. What is different about mine than any others? I know there is one person that made the statement herself she wished she could write happy ones, and yet I never see anything like *PUKE* on her posts. Why is that? Why is it this is how I am treated? Every body else that feels the bleeding heart within can post and I never see anything like that on their posts. I never see them get comments pretty much saying lay off--it's as hard for them as it is the one posting. Why would it turn anyones stomach?
Curious,
Shara~

littlewing
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5 posted 2003-09-23 07:15 AM


Oh Shara honey , no . . . no no
I think lexy meant as in life
like a merry go round
like:

we mess up or life messes us up
we puke
and get right back up and start living again

Lexy?

Sweety . . . your writing is beautiful

xxoo

SharaRose
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6 posted 2003-09-23 12:05 PM


Thank you Littlewings...you are sweet. Bless ya bunches for healing the hurts.
, and
Shara~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Marsha
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7 posted 2003-09-23 05:37 PM


Shara rose, I'm hoping that the pain will fade with time

Don't fear the demons of the night
They will fail before hope's light
Nor allow fears to scare you
Faith and truth will see you through
The sun will shine on you once more
You'll be strong as you were before
Take HIS hand HE will guide you
To the path that's safe and true

Don’t fear the whispers all around
They will fade in lonesome sound
And do not heed nor listen to
All those who try to frighten you
Within your soul there is light
Which will protect you in the night
Lift your eyes and receive HIS grace
Which leaves within HIS loving trace

Don’t fear the path is lost to you
It is there still so bright and true
If you think you’ve lost your way
Ask for HIS guidance every day
HE will guide your steps safe and sure
Until you reach your haven’s shore
You’ll see HIS face shines so bright
Which banishes fears of endless night

Don’t fear the demons that crowd about
HE will not allow them to get out

Marsha

and in the meantime here's some light to brighten your soul
love and warm stuff
as always
Marsha


Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

SharaRose
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8 posted 2003-09-23 06:30 PM


Thank you Marsha. This was very sweet. What a lovely gesture, and I appreciate the thoughts, and encouragement these words just gave to me as I read them. Words that heal are not forgotten. I saved this. I hope you will not mind I did that.

God Bless,
SharaRose @-->--

p.s. I see the name Kethry. Who is Kethry? Is that a poet here at the site?

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Marsha
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9 posted 2003-09-23 07:14 PM


Shara rose, Kethry, or as I always refer to her as my beloved Keth, is not just a poet on this site, she is the inspiration that fills my soul. She and I are as interlinked as twins souls can be, her dark matches my light, we are as I've often said woven with the same thread. We might be on opposite sides of the world, but we are truly in sync. There are times when I answer the phone at just the moment Keth rings, and she does the same. We think the same things, we say the same things, we like the same things, she is the other half of me and I am the other half of her.

I'm glad you liked the little poem, take care of yourself, for always when you seek it the light will shine.

Love and warm stuff
as always
Marsha
:squeze:

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

SharaRose
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10 posted 2003-09-23 08:30 PM


I see. That is very sweet. I am glad you have this connection with your souls twin. Good thing to have.
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

serenity blaze
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11 posted 2003-09-24 02:07 AM


Hugs Shara.

It's not too late for things to be different.

You remind me when I'm blue, and I'll keep reminding you, k?

*hearthugs*

SharaRose
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12 posted 2003-09-24 10:25 AM


Hugs back to you

Please do...and I will do the same for you...well if I see you here. I don't see you much, but I always look for you, and a few others here, but I don't always feel so welcomed to post a reply so there are lots of times I don't. But I can see you welcome me now so I will remind you, too. This comment was full of heart. Thank you so much.


SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Lexy
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13 posted 2003-11-02 11:34 PM


oops, I should have specified what I meant before I started rambling. sorry. I was refering to life and the point that I got from your poem.  
eor
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14 posted 2003-11-04 07:17 PM


im sorry for you pain, i wish life was so much different for you, but i know you are a much, much stronger person because of it.  that scar tissue deep inside will just make it harder to cut through next time (hopefully there never is another to treat you this bad,i only wish the best for you!) but i always do enjoy your writing, it is always very deep and passionate, but that is how you are, don't ever change, you are a wonderful person, and some day someone will realize and give you the respect you deserve.

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

SharaRose
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15 posted 2003-11-05 05:00 PM


Thank you eor...I appreciate the kind words.
Terri~

mysticpoe
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16 posted 2003-11-06 08:29 AM


If you didnt think yourself so stealth
Flying below radar.  I'm guilty, emotional SharaRose. Very emotional. Nice write.

poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

SharaRose
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17 posted 2003-11-06 11:09 PM


Thank you for the read, and comment.
Terri~

passing shadows
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18 posted 2003-11-08 12:49 PM


maybe it would...who knows?

loveya

SharaRose
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19 posted 2003-11-08 04:27 PM


Not a doubt! It's all perspective. Yes, it would be different. Definately.
Love ya girlie
Terri~

passing shadows
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20 posted 2004-05-17 03:55 AM


there's a lot of 'ifs' in life
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