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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
She started up a slow sad beat, On concrete floors, nodding her head Tapping her feet. Her drum was throbbing, pulse of her hand, So delicate, a soul, a ghost Ocean over sand. Beauty never meant for fame Inside, her heart to compare glass And yet a bullet never stopped Just shone. Waking up every morning and Sleeping on those concrete floors. Come on God, do I seem bulletproof? |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
brilliant loved it. wow your really on form aren't you! peace nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
amazing.. as always  wow, you know out of all of us, you're the only one whose muse has never abandoned you. The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return. |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Thanks you two! I really appreciate it when you read my stuff, even more so when you reply and even more so when you like it! Hm. Your muse wouldn't abandon you unless you let it. I don't want to be really cheesy right now, but it came to me and.... well you know...that quote? "If you love something let it go, if it comes back it's yours to keep if it doesn't it was never yours in the first place." or something like that? And NOW is when I get into metaphors, but look at that from the muse's point of view. I guess what I'm trying to say is that you should come back to your muse. And I mean that in a completely selfish way, I just want to read your stuff again. *cringes at the reply* Much love anyhow. Hollow. Courts. Come on God, do I seem bulletproof? |
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Clown New Member
since 2005-11-10
Posts 4the twisted circus of my mind |
How is a Muse responsible for your work? If you want something to happen, you make it happen for yourself. |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
I LOVE THIS! jaaaysusss one of ur very best hehe can i confess? i saw u in ur aggy form sitting there tapping that concrete floor. made me smile. love you CVR can you find me space inside your bleeding heart? |
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