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My demise
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My demise |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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When I wake up late at night, Nightmares are by my side, I clench my chest to feel the sound, But my heart is left out of bound, Shaking like leaves about to fall, My heart was stolen, now that I recall, An angel in disguise came to my side, Decide to love me and then she chide, now that I recall, the moment was right, My trust flew a fiery flight, And then the wings were clipped in four, When she stamped out my life’s door, So many wounds left unhealed, And many future dreams killed, Another men has the pleasure of life, That now has become my demise. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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xFromtheHeartx Member
since 2005-09-24
Posts 80Florida U.S. |
very sad, heartache seems to fall upon every1 these days, thanks for sharing bro Peace |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
I don't know if you remember me or not but i use to use this site alot and it's very nice to return and see some of the same face from when I left. As to your poem it is very good I would have changed the format a little bit but i enjoyed it very much. My demise O' Yes my demise was firey I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Good to have you back my old comrade. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
you need to re-read before posting. another men now... c'mon basic gramamer here. such errors distract greatly from the poem -majnu |
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jinx26 Junior Member
since 2005-12-12
Posts 38Jersey |
Beautifully sad and moving. |
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