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Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

0 posted 2005-10-03 04:47 PM

A blow drop goes down my face
with saddness that comes all over the place
It seems like I can't follow things
so easily as I seem
Sometimes I just want to shout
Making things vibrate

I feel like the ocean is calling for me
Making me see a different way through
I can't help but wonder
If my problems will ever slow down
and quit

But God is here
so I am sticking
with light to light the way

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

1 posted 2005-10-03 05:56 PM

this is beatiful thanks so much for sharing this

-may the force be with you in poetry

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2005-10-03 08:56 PM

Right on! Jesus rocks! Your "constructive critiques" thing, you'll find out. They'll end up coming back to you possibly and you'll learn from them, and you probably already communicate with other poets. God bless.

-GIS

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2005-10-04 06:58 AM

What a beautiful, inspiring write Laura.
You bring light to the dark, missy.

xFromtheHeartx
Member

since 2005-09-24

Posts 80
Florida U.S.

4 posted 2005-10-04 09:46 PM

beautiful Laura, siplely beautiful, i hope things get better on your part. who knows what the future holds eh? nice write!

sweetpoetess
Member

since 2005-02-27

Posts 428
Florida

5 posted 2005-10-05 12:06 PM

This is really good. Man, I know how it feels when problems keep on coming and don't quit. Keep up the awesome poetry!!!

Poetry is beauty in words.

Poetryatheart
Junior Member

since 2005-10-05

Posts 16
Jax, FL

6 posted 2005-10-07 12:27 PM

your poetry was good. you are a good poet

hope, love, is the value of poetry

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

7 posted 2005-10-07 07:46 PM

I do not believe in God, but I respect this poem for the self empowering strength it seems to have. I'm glad you have found your way through

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