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0 posted 2005-09-04 07:11 PM



A smile is stolen,
And a heart is broken,

This creature submits to no one,
Whether it comes from the past,
Or the present or the future,
It provides the same lecture,

When a want is not heeded,
It cunningly proceeds,
A stable way it creeps,
With each soul it rips,

For this sadness becomes mine,
That is why I write these rhymes.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2005 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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1 posted 2005-09-04 11:37 PM


It sneaks right up when you're not looking.
aussie teen
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since 2003-09-27
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2 posted 2005-09-11 06:41 AM


short simple to the point... loving it ronil...
whenever you write you use so much emotion that its leaping off the screen... everything has its way of coming out of nowhere... well done
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

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