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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
I suffer thee O' lot of the damned if suffering it shall be for I have long known these walls of bondage She holds me here in the darkened hours and sings her lullabies She is love and hate She is rain and thirst She is hunger yet she sates I seek no release as there is only death in the parting of ways |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
yes, those walls are comforting! eloquent. i relate, indeed. touche'!!!! this was excellent, edder! of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I see your muse is back...good to see you posting....I enjoyed this dark musing.... hugsss you... ~~**~~ |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
EG- thanks for the read, glad you enjoyed. Lauren- unfortunately it's not, this is an old one i pulled out.  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
bondage.... okay I will leave that alone.  I have told you a million times that you underestimate your writing....this proves it! Write more!! please!  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh, but this is so darkly beautiful, I saw so much more in this Edder. |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Susan- must you? the writing thing just isn't working right now.Sue- thank you, it's a pleasure to know you read me. |
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