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0 posted 2005-07-22 08:31 AM


Your Selfishness
Taugh Me To Be UnSelfish
Your Attitude
Taught Me To Smile More
Your Hate
Taught Me To Love
Your Lies
Taught Me To Be Honest
Your Curelty
Taught Me To Be Kind (To Those Who Deserve It)
Your Roughness
Taught Me To Be Gentle
Your Unloving Arms
MADE Me Vulnerable
Your Neglegence
MADE Me Blame - Myself
Your Abuse
MADE Me Hate
Your Hate
MADE Me Resentful
Your Insults
Took Away My Pride
Your Commands
Took Away My Childhood
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But
-
Your Absence
Gave Me Knowledge
Your Insults
Gave Me Inner Beauty
Your Abuse
Gave Me Strenght
Your Lies
Gave Me Honesty
Your Attitude
Gave Me Smiles
Your Commands
Gave Me Maturity
Your Unloving Arms
Gave Me Honor
Your Roughness
Gave Me Courage
Your Hate
Gave Me Love
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My Strenght
Is Yours
My Courage
Is Yours
My Knowledge
Is Yours
My Honor Is Yours
My Inner Beauty
Is Yours
My Honesty
Is Yours
My Smile
Is Yours
My Love
Is Yours
I'm Almost All Grown Up
Thanx

Laughter Is The Enemy Of Desire, But Desire Itself Is Painful, After You Get That Which You Desire, What's Next?

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1 posted 2005-07-24 05:11 PM


This is a really good poem. I enjoyed reading it. You misspelled "Strenght" twice.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

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