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Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand

0 posted 2005-06-09 01:24 AM


A piece of true insanity,
Beaming…
At your
Fall from grace.
Well, stars aren’t always visible
To their half dressed eyes,
Mangled and complicated
What, there for, is death?
If it is not my life?
Good people aren’t always around
When you trip over laces
And spill your already cold caffeine,
The brunt of it
A laugh,
Shot with a smoking gun.

Come on God, do I seem bulletproof?

© Copyright 2005 Courtney - All Rights Reserved
green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2005-06-10 08:53 PM


Sounds like it doesn't end so well.  I loved it.  Rock on!

-GIS

Satan a.k.a. The Stupid Angel

silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
2 posted 2005-07-11 03:51 AM


my god i loved this

girl you are so amazing, i can't even explain. thsi was a work of a true professional, i am way too proud to know you. GOD I WISH I WAS AS EXCELLENT AS YOU!

can you find me space inside your bleeding heart?

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