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silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

0 posted 2005-05-15 12:01 PM

everything she is
has fallen apart
her hands moist
with crimson guilt
she wipes away
a fallen strand
of her sandy hair
shutting her eyes
from the images
only to find
they linger beneathe
what she cannot run from

gasping for air
and for repose
collapsing to her knees
in a merciful buckle
she screams
and she screams
begging someone
'please
save me
from myself'

her arms limp
and hanging lifelessly
by her sullen side
she wimpers
opening her eyes
only to close them again
finding once more
that her wounds
and her scars
are not only
skin deep

can you find me space inside your bleeding heart?

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2005-05-15 12:15 PM

They never are! A very powerful write, well done!

~* Let's spend less time worrying when our life's going to end, and more on when it's going to start *~

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

2 posted 2005-05-15 12:28 PM

thanks, i liked this one. haven't written well in a while.

can you find me space inside your bleeding heart?

vampiana
Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

3 posted 2005-05-15 12:46 PM

i think that is the best i have ever seen you write... that is so incredibly beautiful and god, it's achieved the unachievable! it's achieved perfection

peace.
xoxo

I am a wilted black rose. Searching for cracks of sunlight, to nurture me. And to help me grow.

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

4 posted 2005-05-15 02:11 AM

Just like watching that music video last night, it broke my heart. You constantly amaze me with your writing and I'm glad you like it. Because I love it. I love you too by the way. By the way I tried to say.......

Hollow.
Courtney.

Come on God, do I seem bulletproof?

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

5 posted 2005-05-18 01:01 AM

wow that was wicked.

so so so so good

best ive seen from you in a while hun.

i wanna hug you lol

l&e

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

6 posted 2005-05-20 12:41 PM

Yeah thats kinda like when you realize your screams aren't figments, that it would actually give some comfort to release a few. Funny how you didn't even think you cared.

-GIS

...and the way things are goin, they're gonna crucify me. -The Beattles

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