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River
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since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world

0 posted 2005-05-07 03:19 AM



as she opens her cold blue eyes
something shatters and the world comes to a trance,
blooming peacfully like a flower,
no longer disconnected and crumbling as it once was.
her voice raised she echoes into eternity a song that has an earie familiarity,
as if every living thing has heard it at the beginning of being.

the ground shakes,
splitting into pieces.
out of the cracks explode beams of steady brilliant light,
charging the air with electric vibrance,
intoxicating the atmosphere
dissapearing into the night sky
as it is imprisioned by the stars that dim

healing the scars that once ravaged it's surface,
she smiles
and once again her children are safe in this house of men.


(k, not dark, i know, but it has that eeriness to it..soo...yeah, lol, i like posting here for some reason)

How can I stand here and not be moved by you? - Lifehouse

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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2005-05-09 11:51 PM


like one taking their head out of their butt?  I could take a lesson from this.  Nice write.

-GIS

...and the way things are goin, they're gonna crucify me.  -The Beattles

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