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Gothika_07 Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 61new zealand |
was it you who came to see the broken person i've come to be i try not to, but i succumb to the beating of the drum pounding in the depths of my mind somewhere somehow i've become blind to the pain, that you' have caused rewind my life, keep it paused i want to forget, i want to love fly me away like a turtle dove let my flow within the gale let me fall, let me fail give me time to become whole give me time, to mend my soul that has become a pure black sick of the hunt, time to attack All i need is time, but the clock forever ticks "I have a hard time keeping from drowning in this crazy buisness" - River Phoenix 1970-1993 |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
hey hey dude god ive missed you round here haha uve missed out on some wicked stuff!!! this is gud, easing back into the scene??? some of the rhyme seemed slightly forced but loved: let my flow within the gale let me fall, let me fail thats goood keep it up dude miss you love and empathy sophie nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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Gothika_07 Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 61new zealand |
Yeh i no, i wasn't feeling to inspired, but i wrote a beta one but i accidentally deleted, so thn i tried to make this one like the other one and it wasn't so thn i gt angry so thn i jst posted it out of spite. but at least its ok you'll hve to 4give me like you said 'easing back into it' BUT IM BAK LIKE THE CAPED CRUSADER! "I have a hard time keeping from drowning in this crazy buisness" - River Phoenix 1970-1993 |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
let my flow within the gale let me fall, let me fail also my fav bit... and the bit about..uhh *remembers* ooh yes "Sick of the hunt, time to attack" wicked!!! Wow i haven't seen u in AGES!!! it was good, great to see u back! eergh i and SO know about the whole delete then try to make it the same but just CAN'T QUITE GET IT. yes. tis aggrovating. miss ya lor can you find me space inside your bleeding heart? |
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