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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2005-04-24 09:38 PM



I see you there
A mirage display
Old death is far behind
Is fare you'd be so kind
Set my seat, just a peek

Artistic design one word at a time
Hear the sounds
Feel the noise
A thousand faces on my head
What do you want to kill anyway?

Are you dead?
Can you feel at all?
Such a beautiful friend
Take away my face
And show me who I am

Run away from the facade
Ignore the ignorant blockade
Pass through this soul
Sell yourself
Buy something free

I give whats not enough
Keep reading me
See my words, hear my mind
I fillet myself
Killing what isn't me

You'll understand
You'll see
You'll be ready, open
Remember, never forget, exist with him
He watches and sees

You are beautiful
Something rare, like a diamond
In your deepest pit
The sinner will give it,
Give it all for everything

Open, reluctant, remiss
Separate reopen
Settle commit
Feel it
Just this is you

John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal.

© Copyright 2005 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
Purity
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since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA
1 posted 2005-04-24 10:45 PM


Wow. Your poems have taken on such depth. They are melancholy, but with an ethereal message. I like this a lot!

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2005-04-26 08:49 PM


Thank you Purity.  I've been in a thinking environment where its actually neccessary.  Thank you.

-GIS

John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal.

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