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Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

0 posted 2005-03-23 07:04 PM

We hear the wave
of the many who
Cling to falling
stars like glue

When you get the nail through my core
I'll still come back, I'll stick to you
When still you let me rot, and seathe
I'll still come back, I'll stick to you

I hear the waves
Of the many who
Ripped my closing
Scars anew

Strung to faking flowers
(In the evening it devours)
Enticing me to at long last bloom
(Aided parasites for hire)
Until the rain subsides
I'll wear my umbrella up high
To cast the darkness over me
The rain falls faster
Towards it's suicide puddle
and we'll wear on...

Hear again the wave
Of only few
Fill my void again
Oh only you
I'll still come back
I'll stick to you...

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

1 posted 2005-03-24 02:55 PM

Could see this as a song, nice flow

New lovers are nervous and tender, but smash everything. For the heart is an organ of fire

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

2 posted 2005-03-25 12:43 PM

great rhythm...washes a bittersweet feeling in waves

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

3 posted 2005-03-25 10:57 AM

Wow,such poetry in motion...in music...
I loved the methaphoric ambience of this one, and will forever chant the first stanza as a creed of life.
Great write!

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

4 posted 2005-03-27 04:34 AM

Thanks all for your responses.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

5 posted 2005-03-30 11:44 AM

You create such amazing images with so few words.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

6 posted 2005-04-04 10:05 PM

Amazing, as always. and going in my library, as usual.

If I could fall asleep tonight
you know I’d dream of you
and wake up wondering
why my heart is so cold
~WinterWren~

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

7 posted 2005-04-05 01:00 AM

I love this, so so much.

Hollow.
Courts.

Come on God, do I seem bulletproof?

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

8 posted 2005-04-05 01:48 AM

Thanks all for your responses, they mean a great deal to me, as per usual

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

9 posted 2005-05-07 03:06 AM

dude I so can't believe I've been away from this place for so long. agh! to think that i could have missed this great write if i had waited longer? *shudders* lol, good job!

How can I stand here and not be moved by you? - Lifehouse

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