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Dark Poetry #4

keep you warm

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

0 posted 2005-02-25 04:46 PM

crisp winter morn
your eyes cutting deep through me
icy promises
whispered to the night
hold me, won't you?
you need me, don't you?
or is your presense
only an excuse
to keep you warm

can you find me space inside your bleeding heart?

[This message has been edited by silhouetted (02-27-2005 11:28 PM).]

vampiana
Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

1 posted 2005-02-25 04:53 PM

i will make my reply short and sweet, to go along with your poem.

short, to the point, awesome.

I am a wilted black rose. Searching for cracks of sunlight, to nurture me. And to help me grow.

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

2 posted 2005-02-25 09:20 PM

I tried to pick one bit, maybe one line that was the best. But instead I picked half of it.

hold me, won't you?
you need me, don't you?
or is your presense
only an excuse
to keep you warm

Omg, reading it again. Wow, dude.
That is one awesome poem, *squee* I love your words. Keep writing, yeah?

"Let me collect myself" - Devo Nod. I Love You To Death.

Hollow.
Courtney.

Come on God, do I seem bulletproof?

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

3 posted 2005-02-27 11:22 PM

ahhh wonderful

awesome

i wish it had a name!!!

*sigh* just wat ive been needing

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

4 posted 2005-03-10 01:26 AM

Wow...

Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy...

Much Luv,
"Trina"

EveGnosis
Member

since 2002-02-21

Posts 300
New York, USA

5 posted 2005-03-13 09:50 AM

the brevity of this one makes it very strong! i felt this, as i have felt this way.
excellent poem!

of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep.

Beenie
Junior Member

since 2000-08-17

Posts 27
WVa

6 posted 2005-04-19 06:32 PM

Straight to my heart....gotta keep this one!

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