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Ladycat
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At the edge and a doorway,TX

0 posted 2005-02-18 08:24 PM


We said we would never lie to each other
Then again we said that we would always be together
Now here you are keeping secrets
Hiding away like a scared rabbit
Keeping yourself shut off from the ones that love you
We held true to only one thing
The idea of love and magic
Sharing feelings and holding each other close
Now here you are keeping secrets
While everyone around you knows the truth
Passing judgement on you
And you let them
Just so you won't have to show the real you
We tried to be civil in public
As the whispers came around us
We were both drowning in your sorrow
While you held on to your secrets
To each other we were lies
My secrets were apart of our lives
And your secrets were all yours
There were days when I thought that you hated me
Yet now I know better
You were just keeping secrets
To keep them from hurting you

Love,
Ladycat


Insanity in individuals is something rare but in groups, parties, nations and epochs, it is the rule.-Friedrich Nietzsche

[This message has been edited by Ladycat (02-20-2005 03:46 PM).]

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EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
1 posted 2005-03-05 02:47 AM


Ouch! Secrets can do that!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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2 posted 2005-03-05 09:24 AM


ah yes...secrets can crush a relationship and leave you wondering why you were there is the first place...

Very well done.  

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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Watertown, NY
3 posted 2005-03-09 04:11 AM


Secrets....A Painful Thing....Great Write.

"Trina"

Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy...

Much Luv,
"Trina"

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