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Remembering You
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Remembering You |
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Ivy New Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 7 |
Remembering You The thought of you has been Implanted in my head It feels like old-times Despite the dangers I know will impend A long time has passed I now have a new lover and friend But we ended without conclusion And silently I am falling again I hear you ask of me often So I know you don't forget. I hear you think of me still As you lay your new lover Down on your bed. I know that I hurt you In my crime of spite But I realized this long ago And I will pay for the rest of my life I am trapped in a dangerous whirlwind Yes, I am still thinking of you. But it helps me to know You still love me, too. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that's sad |
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Ivy New Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 7 |
Uhh, really hoping you meant sad as in "that's too bad". Not as in a "sad attempt".... Ivy |
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*Inque Monroe* Junior Member
since 2003-10-18
Posts 43No where special |
The poem is really good, it holds a feeling of extreme saddness. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it helps my sad mood today...maybe I can write something eventually now...great to read this again |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Somehow I would feel glad, and sad, because I would know 2 things have happened...I wasn't forgotten, and the other it's a positive thing to know you are still loved even when apart. I understand about the sad though so it would be bittersweet. :'( Love, Terri~  |
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redrobin21865 Junior Member
since 2003-11-09
Posts 12Florida, USA |
wow!!! this really hit close to home with me. Great work |
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