Harboring Harvest Muted and Dying Angels

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Dark Poetry #4

Harboring Harvest Muted and Dying Angels

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2005-02-10 01:40 AM

I’m on a trip
A journey where my teeth become the floor
And you pull my head through a spark
Which ignites into violent razor sharp fangs

Can you feel it
Please tell me you feel it
Sense it somehow
A pulse
A touch
Something beautiful

Dwindling away in a sardonic rot
Judgmental lines
A life of lies
Sure sadness and petite suicide

Breathe
A simple breath
Erotic aroma
Just say love
Pour out my mind
A new rip from my soul
But does it hurt....

Taste these words of hope
Faith ever so crunchy
And I chip a tooth
But just the dead part falls away
Off into a land
And if you follow it
You see a man
Set in his prison
Trying to see a way
Punished by a foggy light
That somehow blinds his eyes

This sparrow if it could only see
Could fly beautifully with the doves
And feed off life
And not be dead anymore

Leave an empty grave

Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God.

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

1 posted 2005-02-10 01:45 AM

If Only.

Last stanza was perfect. Touching poem Craig.

Courtn.

And the legacy runs from needles to guns
And no one's immune to the pain
From Marilyn to River Phoenix
From Elvis to Kurt Cobain

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

2 posted 2005-02-10 03:07 AM

Can you feel it
Please tell me you feel it
Sense it somehow
A pulse
A touch
Something beautiful

amazing.
and the last line finished it off beautifully. yeah, very touching.

laura

can you find me space inside your bleeding heart?

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

3 posted 2005-02-11 12:07 PM

Thank you Courtney and Laura. I feel like I've accomplished something.

-GIS

Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God.

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