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Dark Poetry #4

Like it wants to

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

0 posted 2005-01-23 05:05 AM

Cut cut cut
cut away.
sink into it
deeper
with your scissors.
numb it
it stings a little.
tear it to pieces
with your gorgeous Tender Hands.
beat it till it bruises
help it bleed like it wants to.

It may scream
it may cry
but mute it
with a low
angry tone.
scare it.
do what you want to it
but just
make sure you
help it bleed like it wants to.

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

[This message has been edited by darkness_witch (01-24-2005 02:37 AM).]

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

1 posted 2005-01-23 09:16 PM

*sigh*

wicked. i loved this.

sad, really sad, but really great.

keep on keeping on soph.

laura

you're the only one keeping me alive

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

2 posted 2005-01-23 09:39 PM

Don't be so sad, you've got a friend in me right?

When yout think nobody cares
Nobody cares
Nobody cares like a bear

(From carebears. God bless)

Still, great poem.

Hollow.

And the legacy runs from needles to guns
And no one's immune to the pain
From Marilyn to River Phoenix
From Elvis to Kurt Cobain

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

3 posted 2005-01-24 01:45 AM

umm...this feels like me. like that part of me I try to ignore yet give a bit of leverage to in writing. for that reason I don't like this, but the feeling is strong so it is a good poem in itself.

- River

How can I stand here and not be moved by you? - Lifehouse

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