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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Hello, dear Can I take your coat and show you Where I sleep? My limbs are tired and my bones Are feeling weak But I’m ok, because I’m awake So conscious of myself. I wonder if the day will come When I will scream for help. But I doubt it I’m curled up here on the couch And my cheeks are dripping wet Your raw golden attention Comforts the little soul I have left. Hello, dear Well, you make me feel so special And that’s all I really needed Then But now it’s not enough, I let you in, This is a piece of heaven And everything is sweet and kind and nice But I do not fit in. I know it’s hard To watch me waste away, But to me it’s just another day You nod your head, You always knew the right things to say Well, you make me feel so special, Thank you For killing my time Don’t be a stranger Don’t be so sad it’s over This is not goodbye this is Hello. And the legacy runs from needles to guns |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
this is so sad an amazing piece of work though. so so awesome and special and unique. i wish i could write like you do so glad i read it l&e nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
OMG! SO GREAT! SO SAD! SO EMOTIONAL! I LOVED IT oh this was so wonderful, i really liked it. another beautiful but not dark poem of yours. loved it. how amazing of you laura you're the only one keeping me alive |
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