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River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

0 posted 2005-01-14 08:44 PM

Bastard
pull away
mentally shove
your face into the rancid dirt
tastes like you
looks like you
breathes like you
fool
took her away
rape
you raped her mind
into willingly giving you
her soul
I hate you forever.
for this
you will pay
shove your face into a rancid fire
scar.
shock.
like you shocked me.
does this feel good now?

"Stained by the sun, I can see colors...colors of mercy washing over me." - 3 Minutes From Home

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

1 posted 2005-01-15 10:32 AM

The coveted "Alrightokuhhuhamen" Touche' award is bestowed upon you, River. This tells it like it is, no holds barred. Lovin' it, I am...

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

2 posted 2005-01-15 06:24 PM

loved this so much
this was so angry, it made me so angry, god this is great. how amazing.

SAVED

laura

you're the only one keeping me alive

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

3 posted 2005-01-15 08:28 PM

Passionate, hatred works in this.
Nicely written,

Hollow.
Courtney.

You just got to see me through another day
My body's achin' and my time is at hand
And I won't make it any other way

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

4 posted 2005-01-16 12:45 PM

Yeah, that does cause strong feelings of... for something like that. It isn't the people; its the influence or idea that does it.

-GIS

Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God.

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

5 posted 2005-01-16 02:55 AM

I think I need to apologize for some of my venom. this is an actual thing that happened and...while I sometimes feel like murder and crap...I don't really hate this person. I do very much hate his actions...and greeny is right. I pray for this guy a lot.

"Stained by the sun, I can see colors...colors of mercy washing over me." - 3 Minutes From Home

youngfirefly
Junior Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 12

6 posted 2006-12-01 03:59 PM

Nicely written poem.

mechanical_animal
New Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 7

7 posted 2006-12-03 03:00 AM

this is a good poem. lots of passion and anger. i really liked it.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

8 posted 2006-12-07 09:23 PM

Spoken like a rockstar!!!

When the chain that holds my wallet
snug is broken,
I find the truth in that I own nothin.

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