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Lisa_bebe15
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since 2001-11-15
Posts 151
Florida

0 posted 2004-12-06 11:39 AM


Look into my eyes,
What do you see?
Do you see that special part of me?
That no one else can see?
Hold me close you can feel it,
Like cannons bursting.
Its a diffrent part of me.
Lost in the abliss, the eternal darkness.
The tears are swelling,
Battles fighting,
Everything is turning gray.
Part of me wants to believe this is it,
The time ive been waiting for,
But I know its not.



© Copyright 2004 Lisa Ann - All Rights Reserved
stevebrklynnyc
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since 2004-01-04
Posts 292
GA, Camden
1 posted 2004-12-07 04:52 PM


Your time will come, trust me.  Great passion in this write, I enjoyed every line.
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