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vampiana
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Nothing and Nowhere

0 posted 2004-12-03 04:43 PM



You're smiling on the outside
But inside you're dying,
no one notices
the blood pouring from
your injured soul.

Your mask of indifference,
too well perfected.

"I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson

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1 posted 2004-12-03 06:44 PM


Beautifully put.

Love,
Ladycat

"Everything changes, everything stays the same."-Bill Austin

Lighthousebob
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2 posted 2004-12-03 10:33 PM


When I was little, my Mother used to say, "You better stop making that ugly face or else your face might get stuck that way...." ....I should have listened to Mom more!!! (Smiles) Your poem actually encouraged me to be more connected with my inner emotions. I DO want to be real. -Bob
darkness_witch
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since 2003-12-03
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Underneath
3 posted 2004-12-04 01:16 AM


loved it
so simple yet so deep

can fully relate.
about any one in particualr? cus i put a lot of names with that poem

i got voted the "smiley one" in our french class. ironic or what.

love  and empathy
sophie

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

vampiana
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Nothing and Nowhere
4 posted 2004-12-04 06:20 PM


did i get voted "most likely to end up in prison?"

Pride is holding your head up, when everyone else has their's lowered. Courage is what makes you do it.

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