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Self-Reliance |
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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
Rely on yourself No one else is real They don't understand How you truly feel Don't surrender yourself Don't say what you know A sacrifice is golden They just want something to show Find who you are Accept it and move on Learn to live in peace When everyone is gone ~This is rather short but it was just a little something to get me thinking again.~ |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
This was cool Brezee, I liked the theme, very well written. Hollow. Courtney. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Yes Brezee, nicely written. I like this very much.  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
Thank you for your replies and for taking the time to read...  ~*brezee*~ |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
I love it.. This is how I think and feel summed up all nice and short like.. Thank you so much for posting. ~Jen Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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