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Oil and Incense |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
We're such a care-free people We don't care at all You can even feel the evil, Truthful vibration of what I say And it feels dead, dirty, And even pierces a bit Fools waiting to fall Fighting wars with rubber, and needles And even dogs Does anyone really expect to win An enemy in the house is the hardest to fight Presumption Pre-ejaculation Pre-meditation Loss of feelings What if sex and love actually were one and the same? And we did obey? And follow rules? Not cheatting, but fair? Maybe we'd be happy... Be a perfect incense and oil for the king Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
awesome, craig! thanks! this was too cool. and ya know what, i believe you have changed my mind about love and sex. well, not "sex"... if you love someone so dearly and so purely that one wish is to show that pure love through a giving of yourself and of sincere pleasure to that one so loved, then it really is "making love" as opposed to just sex... it really is expressing love. it really can then become one. great! you inspire thought! mike |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
This one stands proud. This one stands out with incredibleness. This one rocked hard!!! Your choice of words were spectacular, and I applaud you. Wow! Rider "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm" |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
I wrote a poem years ago "Archetypes of Choice" in which I tried to convey this same theme. Yet, I could never be so to-the-point. I tend to ramble, where you just spit it out. I like that about your poetry. Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Eve, Actually your e-mail is what inspired this one. So thank you. Thanx News Purity, I did try to think about them more, and sometimes I do, but this one was just a spit-it-out type. Thanks -GIS Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
Sex and love are definitley not the same. At least to me anyway. Your style is unique and I enjoyed your post muchly. Keep on posting, great job! Steve. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanks Steve, I didn't really realize I had a style, but you're right I do. Thanks for pointing it out. -GIS |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
nice work craig this one stood out from the rest on the post board cus its risque and controversial! love reading your work so keep them coming love and empathy sophie nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
You're right most times we surely confuse the two. Some heavy thought here, Craig. CB 8) |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Sex or Making Love... Sex or Making Love? Funny that my wife asked me a couple of days ago what I would rather call it. Now, I know that women would rather call it Making Love (Anyway, that's what I've been told) Sooooo, of course I answered Making Love, then my wife said Good... Let's have Sex. Anyway, good poem. -Bob |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanx everbody. I wrote it because there are alot of people who just want to have sex and don't care about the person they're having it with and spread diseases and have unplanned babies, and I was just wondering what if they didn't do all that. You guys are cool. Thanks again. -GIS Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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