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Prelude
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Prelude |
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symphony_of_thoughts Member
since 2003-08-03
Posts 95Somewhere |
Hey man You gotta stop Dropping it down And from the floor Dangling You gotta let go But hold on To your head Your mind is fluctuating Because you can't stop Messing with power plants Controlling the love Let in the sun Gods Hold on spinal wires Care too much for caring And that vaguness that follows Devestating appeals are ecstasy Find stability in your disposition Or else the world goes away Like how you wanted not wanted |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Prelude? Is a prelude the begining of something. This sounds somewhat like the end of something. Nice work. -GIS Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
the poem changed halfway through and i found myself confused... good intention though LOR you're the only one keeping me alive |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
find stability in your disposition.....excellent thought! |
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