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Dark Poetry #4

The guilty blamecaster

vampiana
Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

0 posted 2004-11-19 04:35 AM

The intrepid depths
of this engulfing pool of hate
spurned by the most
envious of all emotion,
has riddled the girl's
once bright and full body,
now reducing her
to a mere empty shell
held together by her own
will to spite the world and the people
she blames for her own
self destructive, jealous nature.
Tis not their fault, blame caster,
Tis only your own.

*i dunno who this is about, it just came to me one day during like french class or something, cuz i couldn't be bothered listening.*

"I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

1 posted 2004-11-20 12:50 PM

I think I'm a blame caster! Or maybe the complete opposite. It's not very nice in the extremes, it's hard. Neutral, average, normal are stupid words because nobody is. Not like your others, it is short and sweet. It's good!

Hollow.
CK.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

2 posted 2004-11-20 09:54 PM

i loved it personaly. wonderful. so damn good and true

gud work

your the only one keeping me alive

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

3 posted 2004-11-21 03:22 AM

nice
maybe not your best but damn good

darkness

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

4 posted 2004-12-13 02:09 AM

I missed this one along time ago or whenever it was written, but I just saw it. Its a pretty good write and it sounds like it talks about the accuser himself. He only has friends because he lies. And he hates the friends he does have. Accusing who he will. Nice write. Pay more attention in French class. lol.

-GIS

let God ROAR,... in power...

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