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Xeonox
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0 posted 2004-11-17 01:35 PM


I feel so hurt today,
Wanting to cry in someone’s lap,
Why am I rejected today?
All I need is to be loved,

Dear God make me comprehend,
Take away this pain,
And give me some love,
That is true to my soul,

I need love so desperately,
That I am going to keep trying,
Till I shed a million more tears,
Sitting in my room pondering,

Years and years I asked for one thing,
To give me some love,
The rest I can get on my own,
But without love I feel lost,

Without air to breathe,
I gasp for someone to hold me,
Bring me in their arms,
And kiss me

Release me from this stress,
And pray that I might one day,
Find love that I never had,
Until then, I cry.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2004 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
green_itchy_stuff
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1 posted 2004-11-18 12:55 PM


I connect with this.  Wow.  Here's some love.  

=GIS

Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head.  Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a

NightFall
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2 posted 2004-11-18 04:13 PM


Love is excallent and comes when u never expect it, its like a slap in the face but the best one you'v ever had, well written feelings, you will find love.
NightFall

"My only love sprung from my only hate to early seen unkown and known to late" Romeo and juliet- William shakespere.

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3 posted 2004-11-18 08:42 PM


I like this alot...I can really relate.
Nice job!

~Alli~

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Xeonox
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4 posted 2004-11-18 10:36 PM


Thank you for your lovely responses.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

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