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kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special

0 posted 2004-11-15 11:48 PM



My memories
reminding me
of what used to be.
Haunting me,
telling me,
nothing will be the same.
I cant take the pain,
or the uncaring look in your eyes.
What did i do?
What caused all these lies?
I miss you soo much.
i cant live without you.
you look the other way,
as if on cue.
Your his little puppet,
he pulls all of your strings.
There is nothing you control,
he controls everything.
he has trained you well,
he has drained your heart.
You dont even care,
you play a small part.
You lost me
because he wanted me.
I lost you,
because you were to blind to see,
Your his little puppet,
he pulls all of your strings.
There is nothing you control,
he controls everything.
I waited and waited,
for you to open your eyes,
but you remain the same,
the truth you despise.
You just cant handle,
the truth is so plain.
He is the reason,
nothing can ever be the same.
because you're his little puppet,
he pulls all of your strings.
There is nothing you control,
he controls everything.

~~~I just wrote this, sort of like a vent thing i guess.....lol~~~


***Nothing is worse, nothing can compare,
It hurts so much, because I know you dont care.***

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

© Copyright 2004 Karissa - All Rights Reserved
News_From_Nowhere
Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173
CU, NY
1 posted 2004-11-15 11:53 PM


I see this in two different ways.
It all depends on who the "he" is that controls the puppet...
I love how this one makes me think in
different directions at the same time.
He could be something deep and dark,
beyond man.
He could just be another man.
Either way, you can take a poetic pair
of scissors and cut those darn puppet strings.

Great poem, K~R!

"So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm"

EveGnosis
Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300
New York, USA
2 posted 2004-11-16 12:19 PM


a so called friend that leads one astray
from true sight of love is a puppetier indeed.
and not much of a friend.
if he lets himself be guided by the strings held by this fool, then he is one as well.
you deserve better, something not made of wood.

mike

i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
3 posted 2004-11-16 10:45 PM


Thanks guys...I liked J.T, and he liked me, but his best freind was jealous, and told J.T all these things that are sooo stupid, and how i am not good enough for him, and all this other crap, so yeah. Everything is just so messed up. Its a lot more confusing in reality, but im not gonna go into details.
Anyways...thanks for all the comments, and everything...

Kissa

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

vampiana
Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere
4 posted 2004-11-17 04:08 AM


AWESOME POEM! as always. I love your poetry. It always strikes a chord with me.

lots of love,
Vamp

"I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
5 posted 2004-11-19 05:10 PM


thnx vamp. I aprreciate it. Im gonna try and erad more here, i have just been really really busy.
'Kissa

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

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