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Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-11-09 03:06 AM

Standing a few steps away
Malicious glances cast my way,
I want to run
But stick it out,
Better a tag-a-long than a coward.

“What’s wrong with her?
I think it’s…don’t you?
No, it’s…right?
Oh, I thought it would be because…”
I can hear you.
Expressing your opinions.
Why don’t you ask me?
Because all I’d say
As the tears well,
“I’m fine, don’t worry.”

I don’t care you know,
Really
All I have is hatred
That keeps me cold enough.

Got to be frozen solid,
To deflect the looks and words,
Looks like everyone spent the night in the freezer.
How pathetic we are.

How pathetic.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

1 posted 2004-11-09 09:00 AM

Ahhh, The Sadness Of Being Pathetic, But We All Are, In One Way Or Another, It All Depends On The Point Of View, Great Write...

Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy...

Much Luv,
"Trina"

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-11-10 12:00 PM

ahh..yes. How pathetic we are...
I loved this poem. Great write, cant wait to hear more. I can relate, just like i can to most of ur poems...

Kissa

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

3 posted 2004-11-10 01:03 AM

KOOOLIO!

awesome with a capital DUBLE YOU! (w)
ha..... hmm

i loved this
so damn flucking true. (courtesy of, ME)

okey dokey, well i gotta study for social studies and science which is 2MORO! ALREADY!

AAHHHH

LOR

your the only one keeping me alive

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

4 posted 2004-11-10 09:16 PM

"Got to be frozen solid,
To deflect the looks and words,
Looks like everyone spent the night in the freezer.
How pathetic we are.

How pathetic."

Loved that ending...it's sad though how pathetic people really are. Your poems are always great...keep posting!

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

vampiana
Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

5 posted 2004-11-10 11:18 PM

cooooll...i liked this. it was very very good, but courtz i'm getting worried about you. you seem really lonely and isolated. are you doing ok? like honestly? cuz no offence, but through your poems, you just don't seem happy.

anyway..really good poem, as always.
Lots of love,
Kirsty

"I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson

EveGnosis
Member

since 2002-02-21

Posts 300
New York, USA

6 posted 2004-11-11 01:58 AM

"better a tag a long than a coward"
ouch, i can relate!
you constantly amaze, courts...

i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

EveGnosis
Member

since 2002-02-21

Posts 300
New York, USA

7 posted 2004-11-11 02:45 AM

oh yeah, i forgot... "looks like everyone spent the night in the freezer"

yep. says it all. again, great write!

michael

i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

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