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Why Try to Hide It?
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Why try to hide it? The essence of purity is honesty, & there's no reason to fear being pure. I can honestly say that I have never felt like this... I have never loved like this... I have never desired like this. Give me the laughter of love. Console my worries of losing that which matters to me most. Can you feel it too? What, then, of in giving it a chance, the possibility of losing the present? Well, if you never try, you should die. It is not uncommon knowledge that what I seek in this is shunned by the majority as wrong, asinine, and not able to have longevity. What do you say? I do not cast aside genuine souls as being strictly a for the moment relationship. I do, however, find that most of these souls lack in their being a way to understand who I am, and what life is about. The genuine soul is found in the compassion of the best friend who knows he's not in the realm of the majority, and indeed, who understands. This genuine soul is what I want as the longevity that shuns the majority's asinine disbelief... A soulmate for sharing the purity of love, the laughter of love, the love of life, and of one another. Will you be the one? Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
That was beautiful. Your feelings actually push through the poem and somewhat create that feeling inside the reader. Its like a flower inside the heart that blossoms and blooms and just keeps doing so. That was awesome. I'm gonna keep this one. -GIS Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
The search goes on! Everything GIS said, he is so inspirational, lol. In a happy mood, yay! I love your writing Purity, always exciting to read, and so thought-provoking. Hollow. Courtney. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
now there is something strange in the air tonight. i read silhouetted's poem, and then this one. wow, such strong emotions from such pure people. not sure i deserve to be here amongst... but learning a lot. this was simply beautiful, and like gis, i was drawn into the feeling where by the end, it was me giving the speech... if that final question were ever asked of me as purely as in this, i'd not hesitate in the yes.  i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Beautiful Poem... Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy... |
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