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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2004-11-08 12:06 PM



Things were different before
Maybe hope and a dream
Maybe truth and understanding

But why?
Who???

I don't care

Its those neon lines and furry feathers
David Bowie and the generation before
They stand so tall and proud
So well deserved

Then I saw God's back
He got mad at me
Even after I saw his face

And the many little ones that run a muck
And are allowed precious time to destroy my life
They're a little late at the breaking
And destroying seems to be a specialty

Feathers, clay red and light white lines
"Did you expect something else?"
Actually yeah, I did
.........
Just a chance to exhale

Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head.  Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a

© Copyright 2004 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
Purity
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since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA
1 posted 2004-11-08 12:22 PM


Amazing the path in which the growth of your poetry is creating...
And there is such a sharp blatancy in the conclusion.
I'm going to visit that friend of mine in NY the first week in December, and you'll probably already be at your journey's new destination. Talk about lights...lol. At least there's no smog in the light of your poems!

As Always...

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2004-11-08 12:44 PM


Yeah my poems are pretty clear, sometimes.  But speaking of smog.  Houston is in the top five smoggiest ciried in the country I believe.  Have fun visiting your friend...

-GIS

Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head.  Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
3 posted 2004-11-08 06:13 AM


Nice...

Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy...

Much Luv,
"Trina"

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
4 posted 2004-11-09 07:57 PM


Thank you.

-GIS

Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head.  Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a

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