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Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-10-31 03:41 AM

Sometimes I feel alone.
Do you feel that too?
With no one and nothing around you,
Saying hello, but talking so long,
Never getting around to say goodbye.

Why do you care?
What’s up with YOU?

I hate you right now,
Funny when I count you as my closest friend.
Even funnier when friends
Are counted on one hand.

Today I might cry,
And you couldn’t care less,
When I feel alone and worthless.
Tomorrow would be different,
And you would love me.
One thing would stay the same.
I’m crying.

You know I love you though right?
Yeah, whatever.

I’ll get straight to the point.
Why not me?
No, not talking to her anymore.
I’m talking to you.
You, you, you, you, you
Yeah,
I hate you.

Why not me?
Why do you hate me so?
Am I not good enough?
Or don’t you really care?

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

1 posted 2004-10-31 03:57 AM

whoever you are writing this about must be such a cow

i'd hate a poem this strong and emotional to be written about me

good poem, heaps of anger in it too.

LOR

put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus

[This message has been edited by silhouetted (10-31-2004 10:14 PM).]

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

2 posted 2004-10-31 05:34 AM

beautiful... just beautifulll...... are yu living my life or something???????? you seem to write exactly what i need when i need it and know exactly what to say to bring a ray or two of light back into my black pit of depression.....
well done.... i love it
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

3 posted 2004-10-31 11:23 AM

Yes, you always have the most beautiful way of venting your pain through your poetry in a way that causes us all to pause...
and realize that we, too, are in the situation right there with you.
Love always Hollow!

Purity

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

4 posted 2004-11-01 02:17 AM

awesome.
helped heaps for me at the moment

wicked stuff chica
love and empathy
darkness

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

PainBaneChaos
Member

since 2003-10-17

Posts 150
The point of no return

5 posted 2004-11-01 07:06 PM

That's exactly it. I'm dealing with it too. *hugs* Good luck and if they can't see you're wonderful then they don't deserve you! So there. :-p

It's not the letting go that hurts, it's the holding on.

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