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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2004-10-23 12:33 PM



There's beauty here
I hate their notches
And noses that wish to snuff me out

Open my next window
See that stands in my way,
A little fluff and puff

Narrow tension
And a bulk of frustration
The bubble grown large

Borders transparent
Borders just the same
Brush away the fog and see the extreme

My toil isn't through
I can see in the clearing
Right past the fuzzy spots
A peak
But its still just a peak

He has made everything beautiful in its own time.  -Ecclesiastes 3:11

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Purity
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since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA
1 posted 2004-10-23 02:21 AM


"My toil isn't through
I can see in the clearing
Right past the fuzzy spots
A peak
But its still just a peak"

When is a peak ever just a peak? You are the peaker; you just don't know how high you are yet. (there's a lol there somewhere)

You're beautiful. If the fuzzies can't see through their cataracts, then send 'em back from the wincing they came...

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

green_itchy_stuff
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New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2004-10-23 10:36 AM


I guess I was refering more to music, but I somewhat get what you mean.  I don't realize exactly what I'm doing, I just know I'm not doing what I want to be doing.  Thanks for the encouragement.

-GIS

He has made everything beautiful in its own time.  -Ecclesiastes 3:11

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
3 posted 2004-10-24 09:18 AM


Great Poem, I Liked It Alot...

I'd Rather Be Hated For Who I Am Then Loved For What I'm Not~!~

Much Luv,
~!~"Trina"~!~

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