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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Sub-consciously, The blade welcomes my fingertip, Runs along the indented lines, It aims to penetrate, Blood bath. But I guess it decides, That it doesn’t need to bathe, to wash, In the scarlet liquid. I guess, absent-mindedly, I climbed down, And decided not to. No, this isn’t heroics, I only saved myself, And, No, this isn’t to be admired, Adoration is for someone, Who never got there in the first place, But keeps on going, Several maps later. I guess this is cowardice, I guess. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
"And, No, this isn’t to be admired, Adoration is for someone, Who never got there in the first place" wow. been here. will again, i'm sure. thanks for your outlook. thanks for your poetry. i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
powerful wow nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
NO, cowardice would be not writing of this at all. You, m'friend are full of strength. |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
"But I guess it decides, That it doesn’t need to bathe, to wash, In the scarlet liquid. I guess, absent-mindedly, I climbed down, And decided not to. No, this isn’t heroics, I only saved myself," loved it. totally awesome. been there too just hang in, its not cowardice, its the furtherest thing from it. agree with soph it was really powerful "I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
No, this isn’t heroics, I only saved myself, And, No, this isn’t to be admired, Adoration is for someone, Who never got there in the first place, wow. i loved this bit so much! fluck i loved that bit and just that little paragraph makes me proud to know you so much. wow. i loved it. and the poem. and you LOR put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
LOR! RING ME YOU SILLY GIRL! And thanks everyone, the comments always help.  I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
No, this isn’t heroics, I only saved myself, And, No, this isn’t to be admired, Adoration is for someone, Who never got there in the first place, But keeps on going, Several maps later. I guess this is cowardice, I guess. amazing...... just amazing this is beautiful hollow..... this is far from cowardice.... the fact that you came back from the edge and wrote about it prooves you are a strong person.... hang in there, keep the words flowing and hold your head high coz u alive Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
NO, It's Not Cowardice, As Everyone Has Stated, Cowardice Is Going Through With It, And Actually Doing The Intended Deed, But You, You Stuck With Life, And Decided To Make The Right Coice, If That Is Cowardly, Than I, Myself Am A Coward Too.....You're Not Alone, Know That All In All, The Poem Was Honest, And Beautiful, I Liked It ALOT I'd Rather Be Hated For Who I Am Then Loved For What I'm Not~!~ |
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