Arteries Torn and Hope Gouged Out

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Dark Poetry #4

Arteries Torn and Hope Gouged Out

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2004-10-10 02:45 PM

I can still feel that intense tremble and fear
Crouched and leaned over
Shaking hurt

Thankful for it
And now I see the spread
Like electricity twinkling through my body

But this is only my shell
I'm not dead
I just live in a capsul that vibrates from time to time

I love it
I know it has a purpose
In the midst of my phobic cringe a white light Comes to lift this thing and take it away
The general mass of my soul still drips with blood
But the clouds are broken now

A faceless and blank stare
Waiting on the prize still
If I run I'll fall in a pit
With no idea of what lies ahead I wait
A promise isn't a promise if it doesn't prove true
He has never lied before
So I tremble and wait for what I will recieve

Not exactly happy
Just trust
Faith in the works
Can you feel my heart's beatting?

He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

1 posted 2004-10-10 07:31 PM

YES, I CAN!
"A promise isn't a promise if it doesn't prove true"...Yes!
Loving it, as you...

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

2 posted 2004-10-10 08:30 PM

"I just live in a capsule that vibrates from time to time"

Yeah, we all feel it, but seldom extract the essence.

Nice write, GIS.

coyote

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2004-10-11 06:57 PM

sometimes the wait is the worst, Craig.

Some days I wonder myself . . .

amazing writing, friend.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

4 posted 2004-10-11 08:21 PM

Thank you. Answering these responces feels like I peeking out from within a bubble. Like a small kind of power. Thank you guys. Love to all.

-GIS

He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11

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