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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
My eyes see you & my eyes see through, too. I hunger for the outer layers! Yeah, you're beautiful Come lay in my arms. But not for long ~ I'll full fast! Once I taste the true filling that hides foully inside I'll know next time to give you what you want! And spare myself the distaste. "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
How you say so much so intensely in so little words, I'll never achieve. The title had me, so I had to check it out, and how uniquely relevant to your topic. But, ouch... I must make sure I stay on your good side. You are too good at this type of poem! Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
heck yeah! 'bout time someone started preaching short sermons. took a bite outta someone's... too good. made me grin an eve-ill kinda grin. i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
seeing inside is a daunting task indeed until it is too late, nice insight. |
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