Does She....(Written 7/18/2003)

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Dark Poetry #4

Does She....(Written 7/18/2003)

AmethystBeing
New Member

since 2003-10-18

Posts 4
Maine, USA

0 posted 2003-10-18 01:45 PM

Does she look into your
Eyes
As deep as oceans
As mysterious as the stars
And know what she has?

Did she watch you walk
Away
The first night she met you
And realize how handsome
You were in the streetlights?

Does she look at you and
Smile
Shyly and yet wantingly
All at once, in the oddest moments
When love isn't supposed to be there?

Did she close her eyes and
Fight
With a monster of passion
Within to find out where
You were that moment?

Does she know how much she
Means
To you, or does she live
Ignorant of the fantastic
Man standing before her?

Did she realize when she first
Spoke
Your name the music
That flows with it in
Magnificant harmony?

Does she know how lucky she is?

Asian Rain
Member

since 2003-10-11

Posts 73

1 posted 2003-10-18 03:40 PM

Welcome! Enjoyed your poem very much and look foward to reading more of your work.
I really like the image you created with these lines:

"Does she look at you and
Smile
Shyly and yet wantingly
All at once, in the oddest moments
When love isn't supposed to be there?"

AmethystBeing
New Member

since 2003-10-18

Posts 4
Maine, USA

2 posted 2003-10-18 03:43 PM

Thank you, Rain. I very much appreciate the warm comments.

~*DrAgOnFLY*~
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since 2003-10-17

Posts 29
Haven of Abyss

3 posted 2003-10-18 05:16 PM

hey chica its me, nice work, i love it. and im glad youre here with me

eor
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since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

4 posted 2003-10-18 05:42 PM

nice write and welcome to passions

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

5 posted 2003-10-19 04:39 AM

Very nice to read!!!

Love,
Terri~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-05-17 04:05 AM

beautiful but heartbreaking

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

7 posted 2004-05-17 06:32 AM

this is beautiful..... it reminds me of what is going on between me and a friend at school..... very nice.
keep up the writing.
Mel

so this is me but what do you care about that????
i am who i am. no one can change that but me, even then it will be a fight to the death

Theory
Junior Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 23
N. CA. USA

8 posted 2004-05-19 06:09 PM

I agree, very nice, good read

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